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Marry me.....Silver Sun of Sweetness

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"Marry me..." he said
In the depth of Autumn,
Orange skies
And fireflies,
Reflecting ocean pool, and
Syrup trees
In the big red and white country.

"Marry me," he sighed
Bright emerald eyes
And his soft peach smile,
On his knee in the mud
holding my glove
And kissed my hand.

"Marry me, Sweetheart..." he soothed so sweet
His words-swarming bees-
Breathing on my neck.
I, weak like a blade of grass
In the wind.
Sensual and seductive sensations
Licking my chest and neck...

"Oh, Marry me, Honey, I love you..." He rubbed my shoulders
Kissing my nose like a child,
Holding a silver ring,
The solemn sweet silver sun shining
Placed upon the ring finger.
I lost air,
Grinning widely, wider than the moon.
Raining pour from my face
To the Soil.

He kissed my ear and
Spoke breathy:
"Marry me, my darling, i love you..."

. . . . . .

"Marry me..." I remember him saying.
Rain and blue moon, thunder
His smiling picture

"I'll be home, Sweetehart...I promise...."

"Marry me...Marry me...please...come back..."
I sobbed my eyes so i rained
With the rain.
Soldier strong...
Bold and being brave
Fought his war...
But never came home...


Silver Sun of Sweetness,
Sensual sun Shining,
Solo innocence,
Solemn and soldier strength...
"I do...."
So i was bored during English and wrote a poem
i love the use of VERY little rhyme
and repetition and ALLITERATION! i loved the alliteration
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Basically, A soldier and his girlfriend are in Canadian woods and he asks her to marry him. Then he is called out to war and ends up dying. so she is still going to marry him, even if her fiance's dead.
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:Nice I like it: :iconmegustaplz: